Supporting/secondary characters
Posted: 2011/11/11 Filed under: Literature | Tags: arthur high king of britain, characterization, christopher pike, final friends, michael morpurgo, point of view, secondary characters, stereotype, supporting characters 1 Comment »
I have already devoted a few blog posts to main characters (hereafter known as MCs), more specifically to romance heroes and heroines. But what about supporting or secondary characters? It is my firm belief that supporting characters (hereafter known as SCs) are necessary to any novel plot. Even if SCs aren’t physically present throughout the story due to peculiar circumstances―in Midnight Rainbow, by Linda Howard, the MCs are stranded in the Costa Rican rain forest―they must exist as figures, as relationships that give the MCs’ worlds depth and realness.
But how do you avoid the two opposite extremes of shallow, purely instrumental SCs, and overdeveloped SCs who end up upstaging your MC? I will attempt to answer this by defining MCs and SCs according to points of view, rather than an “objective” relation to the plot or its various twists and turns. My reflection on the topic is based on my experience as a young reader and audience. Up until when I was well into my teens, I remember being almost systematically drawn to SCs more than MCs. The MC was usually supposed to be the bravest, the best-looking, the smartest, the most successful. Yet my preference always went to some SC, who often acted as the jolly, eccentric, faithful friend.
I am not trying to say that, by embodying a certain traditional hero posture, the MC was dull and fake, while the SC was a more original type. The “jolly, eccentric, faithful friend” is just as much a traditional character as the “hero”, and I am really talking about a vast sample of stories (books and movies alike), some of which are considered classics, and aren’t “dull and fake” by any means. My analysis is more closely linked to my own personality: I was drawn to the “friend” SC, just like in real life, I am drawn to other people and feel very strongly about my friends. The identification factor at play where the MC is concerned would, to a certain extent, stop me from loving her/him in a simple, open way.
By “identification factor”, I do not mean I would naturally identify to the MC as such, but to the way s/he is diplayed. I have mentioned that the MC usually has the qualities that justify her/his central role in the storyline. S/he usually is the one with the exceptional abilities and the exceptional destiny. However, the MC is also the character we get to see from the inside: under the outside, shining appearance, skills and position often lie doubts, insecurity, guilt, anger, jealousy…
In Arthur, High King of Britain, by Michael Morpurgo―which I will probably mention time and again, as it was a long-time favourite―Arthur is the secret, orphaned heir, and he reconquers his lands through his own courage in battle. Yet this takes about one chapter in the whole book. The rest of it, besides introducing us to a number of captivating SCs, shows Arthur: being selfish, weak, cheating on his wife, lying, being jealous, spiteful, and bringing about his own ruin. I won’t deny that Morpurgo’s Arthur has a really compelling and complex quality about him. But can you blame the little girl I was for preferring a simpler, happier, less tragic kind of character than this MC?
Yet, when you think about it, which of Arthur’s SCs/knights isn’t tragic in his own right? Gawain probably isn’t too bad, considering―and guess what, he used to be my favourite. But don’t tell me Tristan, Percival or Lancelot… The main difference, then, really is one of POV. In Morpurgo’s novel, Arthur is 1st person narrator. The reader is in his thoughts, his heart when Lancelot confesses his betrayal―and believe me, his thoughts are not all nice and pretty. He may be Guinevere’s lawful husband, therefore luckier, happier and more successful on the outside; on the inside, he’s very human and very mad. Lancelot, on the other hand, may be in one hell of a fix; from Arthur’s POV, he is his best friend, as well as the man his wife prefers.
In other words, it always feels better/safer from the outside. I am used to thinking my friends are so cool and awesome and I’m so lucky to have them; it’s a shock when I learn that they feel the same about me, because I know myself too well to believe I’m cool and awesome. I have to bear with myself when I’m awful and annoying, kind of like we have to bear with the MC when they’re doing some really stupid mistake. The SCs, by comparison, are the guys who always seem to have things under control, when in fact, we never really go deep enough to find out. For the same reason, they actually tend to fit a (stereo)type more often than the MC, just the way we like to categorize our friends (the crazy one, the quiet one, the joker, the grouch…), while being utterly unable to define our own selves.
Christopher Pike’s YA novels perfectly fit that description. In his Final Friends trilogy, he even uses the characters’ stereotypical personas to muddle up hints and motives. The two MCs, on the other hand, are less easily definable because we see too much of their thoughts. As they become more like realistic persons than concepts, they also fade into a sort of neutral, boring zone. Russ, the seventeen-year-old alcoholic cross-country runner who chops down the varsity tree, or Bubba, the womanizing self-made millionaire computer hacker who wears a sombrero at his high school graduation party, are both as much fun as they are unlikely. But in reality, how unlikely? A great deal of their appeal consists in the mystery that surrounds them, and the distance that separates them from the POV.
I think that the trick for creating SCs who aren’t challenging to your MCs, while still being interesting in their own right and adding depth to your story, is to keep your POV centered on your MCs, and develop the SCs’ image rather than their full-fledged reality. I would also argue that in many romance novels, the hero maintains a position half-way between an MC and a SC. While he is entitled to his own point of view and a significant amount of attention throughout the story, his image such as perceived by the heroine remains prevalent. The identification factor is stronger on the heroine’s side, while the hero takes on the role of “perfect best friend” (such as Lancelot in Arthur, High King of Britain) and “mysterious oddball” (such as Russ or Bubba in Final Friends) all at the same time.
Do you think supporting characters are important in a plot? Whether you write or just read, have you come up with do’s and don’t's concerning SCs? As a reader, do you generally like an SC more than the MC? Do you feel like romance heroes are treated like SCs by their authors?
Final Friends Book 3: The Graduation, by Christopher Pike (review)
Posted: 2011/08/22 Filed under: Literature, Music | Tags: christopher pike, crime, final friends, mystery, review, the beatles, whodunit, young adult Leave a comment »I have previously reviewed the Book 1 and Book 2.
So here’s the conclusion at last. In that respect, The Graduation felt more pulled-together than the last part. Pike explains the leap from the homecoming dance straight to the graduation ceremony by giving most of his characters reasons to have gone away; and isn’t it the least he could do after two tragedies hit this group of Tabb High seniors? Following through as if nothing had happened is what would have been suspicious. At any case, the end of the year has finally come. With it the final friends will meet again for one last time, one last occasion to sort out the puzzle of the two “accidents” that happened.
One of the problems with people thinking you’re smart is you eventually begin to believe it. I remember all the times in class―how restless I would be for the teacher to get on with the lesson. I’ve grasped the concept, I used to think, why haven’t the rest of the kids? What I didn’t realize then is that learning something doesn’t just mean figuring it out. It’s also the pleasure you get from the knowledge. I didn’t appreciate that the teacher would sometimes dwell on a particular subject because he or she loved it. I got mostly A’s but now I wish I’d had more fun doing it.
- Final Friends Book 3: The Graduation, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1989)
Pike’s foray into YA proves wrong so many things I keep hearing about writing from people who have never even been published. How you can’t make a compelling heroine out of a typical wealthy, pretty girl. How you can’t make multidimensional characters based on stereotypes. How you can’t save every character’s life without going overboard with the HEA, etc. Characterization in Final Friends is amazing; the author knows how to play with teenagers’ perceptions of each other, reputations, expectations and secret weaknesses. He manages to make us fall for characters we have all reasons to dislike. Jessica, who would be perfect if she was a little less vain and superficial. Sara, who would be nice if she was less hysterical and bossy. Bubba, who would be fun if he was more transparent. Bill, who would be attractive if he was less boring.
Her mouth was a wonder, so soft and warm, tasting like―well, she tasted like toothpaste, which was fine with him. From now on, he knew, whenever he brushed his teeth, he would remember this moment.
- Final Friends Book 3: The Graduation, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1989)
The end was both surprising enough and fully satisfying. Final Friends is very much in line with a book such as Weekend, just pure YA. They’re great if you like romance; they all get married in the end, or so we’re led to believe. Is that realistic? Who cares? I certainly didn’t when I closed the book. I just felt fine. Mighty fine. And I wanted to listen to the Beatles. I don’t know if it’s supposed to mean that Christopher Pike is a fan, but there was already talk of a Beatles song (Blackbird) in Weekend. In The Graduation, Jessica sings Let it Be at the graduation ceremony:
Do you remember Beatles references in other books of Pike’s? Do you agree with the fact that archetypal characters are harder to write than all-out grey ones? Or that high school love is harder to portray than adult love? Do you think Pike masters it?
Final Friends Book 2: The Dance, by Christopher Pike (review)
Posted: 2011/07/11 Filed under: Literature | Tags: christopher pike, crime, final friends, mystery, review, whodunit, writing tip, young adult 1 Comment »
It would probably make more sense if I’d written a single review for the three Final Friends books, seeing as they’re real sequels, not just related novels. Unfortunately for me (since it’s a suspenseful crime story), I’ve only managed to come by them one by one, and I tend to review as I read, so there you go…
God, I need the third book. If you’ve got it and are willing to send it my way, I’ll gladly give you one of my books in return! The thing is, as you can probably guess, The Dance only takes us deeper into the mystery, scattering possible hints and raising the stakes, without offering any actual answer or certainty. In other words, it builds momentum for the third book’s final big revelation.
This is efficiently done, but not excruciatingly so, either. There is a healthy dose of high school drama to relax the atmosphere, so that somewhere between a death/murder and a near-deadly accident/murder attempt, we almost forget that there might be a killer lurking out there. Instead we get caught up into the competition for homecoming queen, SAT exams, basketball practice and first kisses. More cheese, you might think… In a way, yes, and for our greatest enjoyment; in another, not so much. I was surprised to find several instances of the author’s sharply critical distance from his characters’ all-American occupations and concerns.
[...] Jessica again searched the stands for Michael. She thought he probably wouldn’t attend the dance―he had never struck her as the type that went in for big phony gettogethers―but Nick was his friend, he should have come to the game.
- Final Friends Book 2: The Dance, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1988)
Other interesting elements in The Dance, in my opinion, include astronomy and basketball scenes. Which goes to show that even light, entertainment fiction targeted at teenagers can benefit from those little bits of extra knowledge (aka trivia) that make a story realistic and rich. No, you don’t want to lose your readers into the full details of something too specific, but you should, when you’re writing a novel, take the time to explain things that go beyond mere character interaction. Few things annoy me more in amateur fiction than a character described as a basketball player who never plays basketball, or a supposedly straight-A student who hardly ever seems to give any thought to homework and school.
To the inexperienced eye, the wisp of light in the center of the field of view of Michael’s telescope would not have looked significant. Because it was so far from the sun, the comet’s frozen nucleus had no tail to set it apart from the star field. It was its position―its changing position relative to the unchanging stars―that had initially caught Michael’s attention.
- Final Friends Book 2: The Dance, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1988)
Do you like “well-rounded” or in-between-genres novels, or would you rather read a mystery that’s truly mysterious, horror that’s truly horrific, comedy that’s truly comical, etc.? Do you agree with my writing tip? Should authors develop elements that don’t add anything to the plot, but much to their story’s credibility and substance?
Final Friends Book 1: The Party, by Christopher Pike (review)
Posted: 2011/05/19 Filed under: Bio, Literature | Tags: christopher pike, crime, final friends, mystery, review, whodunit, young adult 5 Comments »
Since I’m not really in the mood for an Opinion Blog, I’ll post the review I’ve promised in my last entry: The Party, first book of Christopher Pike’s Final Friends trilogy. Christopher Pike is a children’s books and young adult author I used to read when I was a pre-teen and young teenager. I read him now out of nostalgia, but also out of genuine interest; because he’s still a reference in the YA/crime/paranormal genres for me. And if not romance, then that’s the kind of novels I’d like to write.
The whole country was in love with phonies, she felt. The bimboes on sitcoms, the rock dopers on MTV, the rich liars in D.C. It made her sick just going into the supermarket and having to look at all those fakes on the covers of People magazine. One day she’d like to start a magazine of her own where she could interview people like herself, people who knew it was all a big joke.
- Final Friends Book 1: The Party, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1988)
Moreover, it’s interesting to note that my obsession with writing about love and relationships greatly developed through reading Pike. I think I have already mentioned my late discovery of modern romance (I was already in my twenties). Before that, of course there had been Jane Austen, and the Brontë sisters, and Charles Dickens, but as far as contemporary stories went, there had mostly been Pike. I already wrote a review for his novel Weekend: for those who can read French, it was published in the e-zine Les Romantiques on page 43.
So, in each of Pike’s YA novels, there is a love story. And not just a love story, but general talk of couples, attraction, sex, breakups, jealousy and betrayals. This is something I appreciate, not only in my romance reader’s quality, but from a purely realistic perspective. You remember how it really was in high school. Everybody was busy having a crush on someone, trying to go out with them, or gossiping about who had sex with who, and the popular guy or girl’s latest conquest. I’m not judging whether this is superficial or immature, just stating that this is the way it was. One major reason why J. K. Rowling totally lost me when Harry Potter grew up and remained desperately virginal and ignorant. (Teenagers watch porn. They talk about sex and tell sex jokes all the time. All the time.)
“I’ve been in there a couple of times. I never saw you. Is it a part-time job?”
“Fifty hours a week.”
“Wow.” He lived in a different world, she realized. He made money, carried his own weight. She charged everything, ran up the phone bill. And from what he said, he watched out for his mom, when all she did was fight with her parents about nothing. She lived such a superficial life.
But what can I do? I’m already spoiled.
- Final Friends Book 1: The Party, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1988)
Mr. Pike shows all that, but with a subtlety, good sense and humour which prevents him from lapsing in either a condemnation or an apologia. While reading Final Friends, I was impressed once more at his ability to grasp and paint seventeen-year-olds’ feelings and concerns. While each of his many characters seem to fit in a different stereotypical category (the shy geek, the nice pretty girl, the cheerleader, the good-looking jock, the artist, the chubby sister, the sarcastic best friend, etc.), as the plot thickens all of them lose their apparent unidimensionality. Behind and besides their universal hope of getting laid, more serious and touchy subjects arise.
“You and your parents are illegal aliens, aren’t you?”
She trembled, ever so slightly. “Yes,” she whispered.
“There were a lot in my old neighborhood. [...] What’s the big crime? They’ve loosened the laws. Stay here a few years and they’ll make you a citizen.”
“That’s not how it works. We got here after the amnesty deadline. In Washington there’s talk about changing the requirements, but until then we could be sent home anytime.”
- Final Friends Book 1: The Party, Christopher Pike (Pocket Books, 1988)
Now, because I’ve read many other Christopher Pike YA novels, from the start I could see similarities with his other works. Or maybe I expected them. In the end, I found myself surprised at the ways the story unfolded, lost in the layers the author kept adding, which were as many possible clues and red herrings. I still managed to guess right at the victim’s identity, but as for the culprit, Pike’s left us in proper darkness. I suspect him of pulling a paranormal trick on us, although The Party was completely free of supernatural. In fact, this first book ends in an absolutely classical, delightful mystery novel atmosphere, with the main male character drawing a map of the house where the crime was committed, and reviewing the people present with the police lieutenant. Maybe my favourite part of the book, which made me long for more good crime novels… and even more for the two next Final Friends books, The Dance and The Graduation. I hadn’t experienced such suspense in a while.
Do you still read the books you used to like as a child or a teenager? Do you have any mystery novel recommendation for my readers and myself? Do you more easily relate to puritan teenagers or sex-obsessed ones?*
* Pike’s main characters are always romantic and decent kids, though. Just… red-blooded too.







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