Full Moon Rising, by Keri Arthur (review)

In a world where nonhuman races are socially controlled, if not always fully accepted, secretive dhampire Riley Jenson finds herself involved in a series of violent events that might all be linked to a potential worldwide danger… Add in the nearing of the full moon that has the werewolf in her in a state of rising sexual need, arousal and appeal, and things could become really complicated.

I don’t often read urban fantasy/paranormal romance. It is meaningful because that specific romance subgenre has its own codes, which can be as far from standard romance ones as to make it feel more like regular urban fantasy than romance. In other words, this type of literature effectively straddles two genres, and it’s not always clear which one is dominant. Full Moon Rising struck me as having in common with romance only its steamy sex scenes, and even in that regard it was different, since most romance is not that steamy, especially when it doesn’t involve the hero.

Here is a basic list of what makes urban fantasy/paranormal stand aside from modern romance:

  • 1st person narrator (the heroine) vs 3rd person (with a balance between the heroine and the hero’s POV)
  • We follow the same heroine throughout a series, vs one couple per book
  • The heroine has several sexual partners over time, vs exclusive couples
  • No HEA to allow the series to continue, vs HEA

To soften the apparent contradiction between fantasy romance and standard romance, I should point out that at the end of the series, the paranormal heroine must find her happy ever after with the man whom we suspected was The One from the start. And the world must be saved for good. If you’re reading the first novel of an urban fantasy romance series, though, just be sure not to expect it because it won’t happen. It doesn’t in Full Moon Rising. And yet, the book ended better than it started.

As opposed to romance novels, in which the subplot supports the main romantic plot, in paranormal the romantic element often only accompanies the disaster scenario. The heroine must (help) save the world first and foremost, and good on her if she can find love at the same time (in modern romance, it would be rather like: in order to follow her heart and make love triumph, the heroine will incidentally find herself saving the world). Because of its prominence, as well as its necessity to span a whole series, the plot should therefore be pretty complex. Well, Keri Arthur’s book is evidence that introducing a complex plot from scratch isn’t easy.

By the first third of the book, I was only half-convinced. The action was both too intense and too slow: the fact that everything was coincidentally happening at once in Riley’s life, yet each thing tidily after the other, felt neither realistic nor consistent. Among the weaker points of the book, I would mention the repetitive character of fight and sex scenes. Don’t get me wrong, I like both kinds of scenes. And I understand that Riley is a vampire-werewolf, which implies an extraordinary sex drive and healing power. Still, at the end of the book all these orgasms and tearing of flesh left me tired.

It’s only when the plot thickens by the middle of the book, and the “hero” finally becomes more present, that I really began enjoying the story. By then, most fantasy elements were in place: the little team of miscellaneous experts, the outline of what they’re fighting against, the hints as to who the bad, bad guys are, and a general impression of the universe we’re into. It isn’t the most original or unpexected story, but I closed the book with a good feeling, and a distinct curiosity for its sequel.

A note on Riley’s sexuality: she’s a wolf, therefore she wants to fuck all the time. I mean especially during the week before the full moon, which is when the whole first book takes place. For me, it was a little frustrating to see her have so much fun with other guys than the hero, and relegate the latter to the role of potential third partner (the more, the merrier!). I mean, he’s the hero, godammit! The reader gets an I-want-him-if-she-doesn’t kind of feeling. But then, I have to say, the woman in me also went: phew… At last a book in which it’s the hero rambling on about fidelity and genuine feelings, while the heroine is allowed to have some fun!

“Hey, I fuck millionaires, so I already know all about luxury. Danger and discomfort can be just as thrilling, believe me.”
He shook his head. “I’m going to have to teach you better.”
I grinned. “Or maybe you just need some of that stuffiness shaken out of you.”

- Full Moon Rising, Keri Arthur (Dell Spectra, 2006)

Truth be told, the way she goes from one partner to the other might not be romantic, at least it was realistic. In real life, you can’t tell when you’re going to meet the one guy who’s going to touch your soul. Chances are, you’re already fucking someone else, just because there’s no more reason to wait for sex than to wait to eat good food or take a good hot shower. So, all in all, in spite of the ever-presence of sex in Ms. Arthur’s book, I liked the way it was portrayed, how she used it symbolically to define werewolves and the way they’re perceived in society. In the end, I grew fond of the heroine’s independence and strength, of her determination not to accept love at any price.

The freedom and excitement of these moon dances were part of my nature, and I’d be damned if I dropped them just because it offended his human sensibilities. I wasn’t human, and he shouldn’t judge me by those standards. And asking me to give up the moon dance would be like asking him to stop drinking blood. I wasn’t fair, and it wasn’t right.

- Full Moon Rising, Keri Arthur (Dell Spectra, 2006)

Do you read paranormal romance? Does crossing genres sound like it can increase your audience, or narrow it? How does Keri Arthur rate as an author of that genre, if you’ve read some of her books?


Late adds / Derniers ajouts

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Côté écriture, j’ai terminé deux chapitres de plus à La Reine, disponible sur mon compte FictionPress. Je rappelle qu’il s’agit d’un roman de fantasy dont j’écris la toute première version dans le cadre du Challenge “premier jet” 2011 de CoCyclics. Je ne cherche donc pas (encore) à corriger ou améliorer ce que j’écris, mais simplement à atteindre l’élusif mot “FIN”.


Côté lecture, j’ai pris la résolution d’ajouter mes commentaires aux fiches du site Les Romantiques. Entrez dans le site en cliquant sur n’importe quelle catégorie, vous trouverez une liste déroulante d’auteures de romance et autres littératures féminines. Il suffit ensuite de faire votre choix! Chaque auteure est présentée avec une bibliographie exhaustive, et chaque titre renvoie à une fiche à laquelle tous les lecteurs peuvent contribuer de leur avis.

So… I published the Chapter 5 of The Vampire Connection on FictionPress. Am I happy with it? Not very. I like the touch it adds to the story, and I feel that the flash-backs are necessary. Still it’s a bit heavy on the past perfect, and some readers might find me too eager to step into the sexual zone… It’s times like these when I realize that, however close I feel to the person I was at 18, I’m well and definitely an adult. I write adult themes because that’s what’s usually on my mind (sex more than violence).

At least it’s done now and I can go on with the story!

See you around,

J


Challenge “premier jet”: enfin!

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Je n’ai pas posté de blog d’opinion cette semaine car… j’ai écrit! Je songe à alterner à l’avenir les blogs d’opinion et ceux où je parle de mes écrits, car j’ai de plus en plus de mal à trouver le temps pour les deux, sans compter la matière.

Alors, vous vous rappelez sûrement mon enthousiasme lorsque j’ai rejoint le Challenge “premier jet” 2011 de Cocyclics avec mon projet fantasy, La reine. Sauf que l’écriture, elle, ne venait pas… J’ai développé mon univers dans ma tête, tenté divers débuts pendant des semaines, jusqu’à ce qu’enfin, hop! je prenne mon courage à deux mains et m’y mette pour de vrai. Ça donne un premier chapitre posté sur FictionPress. N’oubliez pas, c’est un premier jet… Tous les avis demeurent les bienvenus, en gardant en tête que mon but actuel est de continuer à écrire, pas d’arranger ce qui est déjà écrit.

Bonne Saint-Jean!

J

I haven’t posted any Opinion Blog this week because… I have been writing! I’m thinking of alternating Opinion Blogs with blogs about my writing, for it’s becoming increasingly hard for me to find time for both every week, not to mention content.

Chapter 5 of The Vampire Connection is well on its way, and might be up on FictionPress sometime around this weekend… hopefully. Fingers crossed!


Writing a summary/hook

I was a little surprised when I found out that the first (and only) review for my novel in progress The Vampire Connection essentially consisted in a critique of the summary. FictionPress allows for a 255-character summary for each story you post, a space which I tend to fill with random comments and author’s notes rather than calculated, intriguing information about the plot. Clearly I’m bad at writing hooks, just like I’m bad at finding titles. They’re usually the last thing I think about, and I admit that I’ll often treat them as superficial, unimportant details. The story‘s what’s important. Who cares about either title or summary?

Well, some people obviously do. Some people, aka readers who have no reason to read your specific story unless the title caught their fancy or the summary appealed to their curiosity. On a website where users post hundreds of new stories every day, advertising a vampire story as one of many following a trend may not be the wisest course of action. Yet in my smug carelessness, it is basically what I did. No wonder I only got one review after posting four chapters; what do you think?

I haven’t always been in the proper frame of mind to see my mistakes and learn from them, but I’d like to think that has changed over the past couple of years. The many responses prompted by Les Romantiques’ short story contest is a significant example of how greatly personal tastes and understandings vary; proof that you can never please everybody. Nevertheless, I am now used to conceding most any point to somebody who bothers enough to make one. I could, for example, argue that summaries don’t play any role in the quality of the story itsel, which would be true. Except I am not on FictionPress to argue, but to learn. If a reader found my summary lacking, then I better do something about it.

Aaliyah as vampire Akasha

Here is what my reviewer had to say about my summary:

[...] what is so interesting about Ola’s life that it makes us want to read? A very important thing about the story that it must have some sort of conflict. Something she is struggling with or a main problem of the story.

- Fairyn

The fact that 255 characters represent about two lines and three short sentences is in itself a challenge. How to give readers a tempting, yet accurate enough taste of the story in so few words? I took up the challenge. Here is my new summary/hook:

Great powers come with great responsibility… Especially if it involves the power to kill! For teenager Ola and her two best friends, being vampires is no piece of cake. When the opposing vampire factions start hunting them, how much worse can it get?

Another novelty is I changed the main genre from romance to supernatural. Since I last wrote about codes and cliches, I must recognize that romance codes would have the heroine and hero clearly identified from the start. In The Vampire Connection, actual romance is scheduled to begin around the seventh chapter, and as for main characters, it rather follows the fantasy code by featuring a bunch of them. If a reader started reading my “romance” story expecting a declaration of love in the first chapter, they would indeed be sorely disappointed.*

Now on to cliches. I’ve deliberately used at least three cliches in this story: 1) three best friends, of whom one is a blonde, one is dark-haired and one is a redhead; 2) they’re orphans; 3) teacher-student attraction. I hope that I have managed to give each of them a new, interesting twist, though! You tell me… ;)

* Not that romance novels, as opposed to short stories or novellas, should necessarily focus on romance so fast: iconic romance author Judith McNaught thus waits for chapter 16 to make her characters meet in Perfect (and yes, the first fifteen chapters are great!). Modern romance novels are just as rich pieces of writing as fantasy or detective novels; the prominence of the romantic element doesn’t imply the obliteration of all other themes/concepts.


Beyond the Highland Mist, by Karen M. Moning (review)

I had heard a lot of enthusiastic praise for Karen Marie Moning’s books. Admitting that Beyond the Highland Mist isn’t her best work, I am willing to give her a second chance. But clearly with this first try, I was severely disappointed. It contains a lot of my least favourite cliches about romance, and precious little else.

Adrienne, a twentieth-century young woman from New Orleans, is taken to early sixteenth century Scotland by the fairy King as a means to punish the Earl of Dalkeith, nicknamed the Hawk, for pleasing the fairy Queen too well. The Hawk is a mortal with a supernatural beauty and legendary skills in the arts of the bed chamber, both of which have always guaranteed him the adoration of each and every woman he’s ever met. But Adrienne’s one and only experience with a man has made her hateful of males, most especially of beautiful ones. When she is married by force to the Hawk, yet refuses to perform her wifely duty, her new husband knows he’s finally found this elusive feeling they call love…

Does this sound preposterous and stupid in more ways than you’d care to count? Because that’s exactly what Beyond the Highland Mist felt like while I was reading it. Some authors are magicians when it comes to turning a crazy, ludicrous premise into a fully enjoyable, original book (see Susan Elizabeth Phillips with Nobody’s Baby But Mine). Some aren’t. In this novel, Moning definitely isn’t.

Repeating ad nauseam how physically flawless and perfect the hero is didn’t help me picture him one bit. (Especially when he is introduced as some kind of superlative of several other incredibly beautiful men.) The Hawk simply never gained substance in my head. As for his personality, it would seem that Ms. Moning didn’t grasp the concept of making her characters grow throughout the story. Although the Hawk’s outward image changes from that of an emotionless sex machine to one of absolute and exclusive devotion, the author must have felt that it was quite a stretch for the reader to buy. Not to mention that the offense of serial fucking is hard to forgive. We are thus treated to a surprising deus ex machina: Moning ambiguously suggests that the Hawk actually became Mr. Luva under duress…

WTF?!

BtHM's new "torso cover"

Then there’s the heroine. She’s a virgin, still she knows enough about men to swear them off in a way that’s convinced even the fairy fool. Er… not one second. I don’t believe it. And this time again, the author completely botched up her character’s evolution, making her renounce the one thing about her which was respectable: her resistance against the Hawk’s promises of seventh heaven. If there’s one thing I truly, deeply despise, it’s seeing women systematically guilt-tripped for saying no to sex, or for not giving back the “love” that’s bestowed upon them. Passages like this one make me want to scream:

“You, milady, are the iron maiden without a heart. You have brought him nothing but pain since you came here. [...] He would climb into the very heavens and pluck down the stars, one by one, to bestow upon your shining brow, and I tell him you are not worth it. You scoff at his romantic feelings, you shun his freely offered love, you scorn the man himself. Doona tell me you’re not so bad, Adrienne de Simone. You are the worst thing that’s ever happened to that man.”
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“He burned my queen! He stole my freedom, and he trapped me here.”
“Because he cares for you and refuses to lose you! That’s such a terrible thing? [...]“

- Beyond the Highland Mist, Karen Marie Moning (Dell, 1999)

Well, unfortunately, it is. It’s a terrible, terrible thing to assume that only the man is ever entitled to call the shots.

Then there’s the weakness of the subplot. The paranormal battle between the Hawk and the fairy King and his fool could have been much more fantastical and intense than these poor excuses for twists and turns, which in the end only serve to mask the utter simplicity of the love story, the boring ease with which Adrienne falls into Sidheach’s (strong and perfect) arms. At last, what can I say about the author’s writing? It’s not bad, if you can overlook the dubious mix of Shakespearean pastiche and ordinary every day language. Sadly, it isn’t often put to the best purpose:

She’d noticed the stallion’s prominently displayed attributes in the periphery of her vision while she’d been looking at the Hawk’s legs, and managed to muddle the two together, somehow. She certainly had not seen that the Hawk was, himself, hung like a stallion.

Alas, this is not a joke…

What are your pet peeves in the romance genre? And after such a letdown, is there a Karen Marie Moning novel I might still enjoy?


In the Garden trilogy, by Nora Roberts (review)

Over the past weeks I’ve been repeatedly quoting the books from Nora Roberts’ In the Garden trilogy (chronologically: Blue Dahlia, Black Rose, Red Lily), so here’s my review at last.

Blue Dahlia and Red Lily

Nora Roberts is a very talented author. All her books may not be masterpieces, but then she’s written over two hundred of them; and those that are good really are, in my opinion. From the first chapter of Blue Dahlia, her writing grips your heart as she relates the moment when Stella Rothchild, a mother of two, learns that her husband died. A widowed mother: such is a romantic heroine according to Ms. Roberts. And not the kind who struggles until she is rescued by a man ready to marry her again, either: Stella is the perfect single mom, brave, willful and competent, and she experiences her budding love for co-worker Logan Kitridge both as entirely her business, and as coming in the way of her own family.

Of the three novels, Blue Dahlia probably leaves the least room for the main love story. Stella and Logan’s attachment happens quite fast and without too many turns and twists; perhaps my only reader’s regret. Then again, that’s only because the rest of the book is devoted to getting us acquainted with In the Garden‘s world and its diverse, lovable occupants. At the heart of this world is Rosalind Harper, founder of In the Garden, a thriving gardening business, and owner of Harper House, an inheritance from her Southern aristocratic roots. It all looks like paradise… except Harper House is haunted by a demented, man-hating ghost who’s sworn to prevent any woman living under her roof from falling in love with a man. Let the trouble begin…

When it comes to romantic plots, Black Rose and Red Lily are even more original and audacious than Stella’s story, and for this reason I possibly like them both better than the first book. The former describes the path that leads to forty-plus-year-old Roz Harper’s third marriage to a slightly eccentric, divorced scholar, while the latter focuses on the feelings we’ve seen growing throughout the whole trilogy between Hayley, a young pregnant woman (later a young mother), and Roz’s oldest son Harper.

Black Rose is simply the only romance I’ve read so far which features a mature woman with such an impressive past, including grown children. And where the author truly masters her craft, is she manages to make such a risk look easy and obvious. No, love is not a woman’s destiny. It is a woman’s choice. For capable, hard-headed heroines, just read Nora Roberts. Even Red Lily, despite Hayley’s youth, doesn’t belie this statement. Three women, three single mothers, three generations. A trilogy that mixes Roberts’ passion for gardening and a paranormal streak, In the Garden stands among the best I’ve read by this prolific and successful author. And makes me want to read more.

What are your favourite books by Nora Roberts? What types of heroines do it for you?


New chapter posted

This past week’s been pretty tough on the personal level (yes, despite it being my birthday) and I’m not exactly cheerful right now for, once again, private reasons.

So instead of rambling as I usually do, I’m just dropping a quick note to inform you that I’ve edited and posted the fourth chapter of my vampire story on FictionPress. You can read it here. As usual, all comments welcome!

Take care, and enjoy life while it’s good!

J


Word cloud

The thing with creating word clouds out of fiction texts is that the heroine or hero’s name comes out huge. You should expect it. Here’s what I got with the first chapter of my paranormal romance (which you can read here):

You can create your own there: http://www.wordle.net/

And that’s all, folks! Just a useless (but pretty) little find for today… ^^


Challenge “premier jet” 2011

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Ce n’est pas tous les jours que l’on trouve des communautés d’écrivains réellement vivantes, sympathiques et de bonne qualité à la fois! Aussi quand j’ai découvert CoCyclics, l’occasion était trop belle pour laisser passer ma chance de participer au challenge “premier jet” 2011.

Le but est simple: finir le premier jet d’un manuscrit de roman ou de novella d’ici le 31 décembre 2011! Et pour aider ses membres dans cette quête, le forum de CoCyclics ne lésine pas sur les moyens. Allez y faire un tour vous-mêmes: Le challenge “premier jet” 2011

Ma demande d’y participer avec The Vampire Connection, un roman de bit-lit en anglais disponible ici, ayant été rejetée, j’ai ressorti du tiroir un de mes anciens projets, provisoirement intitulé La reine. Il s’agissait au départ d’une histoire située dans un Moyen-Âge imaginaire mais réaliste, or comme CoCyclics ne traite que de SFFF (Science-Fiction/Fantasy/Fantastique), je saisis l’opportunité pour développer le côté imaginaire du projet. Ce qui donne:

Auteur : Asia M
Titre du roman : La reine
Genre : Fantasy
Public visé : Adulte
Résumé : À la mort du roi de Lacomon, sa fille Téber doit se marier pour donner un nouveau leader à l’armée et à la population. Hélas, l’élu de son cœur en aime une autre! Et tandis que Téber s’échine en vain à le séduire, le royaume se désagrège sous la poussée d’envahisseurs barbares. Lorsqu’une intrigue de cour la menace personnellement, la reine consent enfin à épouser l’un de ses prétendants. La reconquête peut commencer…
Inspirations : La légende arthurienne, la Bible, les épopées grecques et latines, et mon imagination!
Outils/méthode utilisés : Cette histoire sera postée au fur et à mesure sur mon compte FictionPress, ce qui m’aidera à rythmer mon écriture.

Et vous, quel projet espérez-vous réaliser avant 2012?

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It’s not easy to find writers’ communities which are truly active, relaxed and good quality all at once! Which is why, when I found out about CoCyclics I couldn’t miss the chance to take part in their 2011 “first draft” challenge.

The goal? Finish the first draft of your novel or novella by December 31st this year. A whole online forum is dedicated to help CoCylics’ members in that quest.

I initially asked to take on the challenge with my paranormal romance The Vampire Connection, which I am currently writing in English and posting here. When it was rejected, I decided to give a try to an old project of mine, tentatively titled La reine (“the queen”). It used to be a medieval AU (alternative universe), but since CoCyclics will only accept projects belonging to SFFS (Sci-Fi/Fantasy/Supernatural), I’m seizing this opportunity to develop the “alternative” side of it. And we have:

Author: Asia M
Title: La reine
Genre: Fantasy
Target audience: Adult
Summary: When the king of Lacomon dies, his daughter must marry in order to give her army and people a new leader. Alas, the one she loves doesn’t love her back! And as she vainly strives to charm him, the kingdom is falling apart under the assaults of barbarian invaders. When a court intrigue threatens her personally, the queen finally accepts to marry one of her suitors. Let the reconquest begin!
Inspirations: The Arthurian legend, the Bible, Greek and Latin epics, and my own imagination!
Tools/methods: I will post the draft on my FictionPress account as I move along, so it helps me pace my writing.

What about you? What projects do you hope to achieve before 2012?

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